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1. Personal Statement
2. Education
3. Skills
4. Career Highlights
5. Employment

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Personal Statement
An energetic and ambitious individual currently working as Assistant Production Engineer in precast concrete manufacturing. Able to combine theoretical knowledge with experience gained from supervisory position to provide reasonable solution for every task given. Has the ability to work under pressure and meet strict deadlines. Fully efficient in usage of Autodesk family software, able to produce 2d drawings, 3d models and advanced spreadsheets in excel. Looking to further develop myself in a Product Design Engineer role.

Education
Koszalin University of Technology, Poland
• 2008-2011 BEng in Civil Engineering,
• 2011-2013 MSc in Civil Engineering majoring in Road Engineering,
• UK NARIC's Statement of comparability to British Master's degree standard,
• Award for the best master's thesis titled “Concept bypass road design of Bialogard”.

Skills
• Advanced user of Autocad 2010-2018, Autocad Civil 3d, MS excel.
• Basic knowledge of Revit, Robot Structural Analysis, Inventor 3d, Solidworks
• Full, Clean driving license
• Level 2 award in ESOL Skills for Life
• White CSCS card holder
• Good communication and interpersonal skills.
• Accepting feedback & taking constructive criticism well.
• The ability to work well on an individual level as well as a part of a team.
• The ability to follow manuals and standards while working on a project.
• Strong analytical aptitude skills and good mathematic and technical knowledge.
• Good attention to detail and creative thinking.

Career Highlights
• Participating in successful production, delivery and installation of:
 Over 3000 precast elements for Mersey Gateway Project including manufacture of a 14,50 m span, 5,85 m high and 99,00 m long portal frame rail tunnel supplied in 56 three part sections.
 Thirty bespoke precast concrete deck sections weighting over 430 tonnes forming new deep water jetty capable of servicing ships up to 120,000 tonnes delivering bulk jet fuel to Oikos Storage Ltd’s Canvey island facility.
 Two 82 tonne precast central pier units for the new Manhattan Gate Bridge in Middlesbrough.
 Over a hundred T, TY, U and W prestressed bridge beams and associated reinforced concrete deck edge units for M8 M73 M74 Motorway Improvements Project.
 Multiple small scale projects in Civil Engineering consisting retaining walls, stairs, sea defenses, head walls, ground beams, cover slabs, bespoke structural products, arches and cladding panels.
• Using geodetic instruments to carry out land survey and produce detailed map of over 20 000 m2 of production and storage area.
• Design of bar cropper and bending shed, reinforcement concrete waste pit hole and aggregate storage.

Employment
XXXXXXXXXx, United Kingdom
05.2017 – present as Assistant Production Engineer
• Maintaining high efficiency of resources usage by both developing production process and following quality procedures.
• Ensuring production meets the targets in relation to volume, quality and delivery deadlines.
• Being a technical advisor on site, dealing with technical queries on a daily basis.
• Ongoing review of the production process and strive for continues improvement to increase manufacturing efficiency.
• Supervising moulds procurement process and dealing with all technical questions related to ordered product.
• Supporting procurement team by producing detailed 2d and 3d drawings,
• Working closely with estimating and sales team by producing factory layouts drawings and making sure quoted price is relevant to the job.
• Visiting suppliers to ensure timescale of jobs and high-quality level of product is achieved.
• Carrying out construction site visits when required.
• Ensuring all works are being carried out within budget by reporting all unpredictable factors and arising variations.
• Taking part in management team meetings to discuss all issues of production, quality and delivery.
• Directly managing joinery shop works and mould inventory.
• Preparing production plans and managing effective usage of areas.

07.2016 – 05.2017 as Junior Quality Engineer
• Assisting Lab Technician in testing concrete cubes, checking moisture content and concrete workability.
• Carrying out pre and post pour inspections of precast products and checking for all quality related procedures in the site are as per approved method statement.
• Taking care of QC/QA documents of the entire project including certificates for steel and aggregate, cubes test results, inspection documents and preparing quality packs.
• Running Site Inductions.
• Signing ready products off prior to delivery.

na samym dole dodal " references are available on request"

Tak sobie zagladam na przykladowe CV.

"Looking to further develop myself" zmienilabym na "Looking to grow further".

Czesto mowimy kalkami jezykowymi tlumaczac w myslach z pierwszego jezyka.

Wiem ze ten post jest stary, ale ludzie nieustannie pisza CV wiec wrocilam do tematu.