Witam, proszę o sprawdzenie CV meza. Dawno nie pisalam cv a to moje pierwsze w jezyku angielskim. Prosze o sprawdzenie pisowni, jezyka technicznego. Wszelkie sugestie mile widziane bo to tylko zarys.

Curriculum Vitae
Name: Jan Kowalski
Address:
Mobile number:
E-mail address:

About me:
I am technically minded person, extremely dedicated and committed to achieving well. I can deal with stress and work effectively under pressure and on own initiative. I am not afraid of challenges and I believe that my future employer would benefit from my motivation, patience, attention for detail and good time management. I am looking to apply these skills to a successful career. Seeks a challenging and varied position with opportunities for personal and professional growth.

Employment History

March 2008 – Present Maintenance / Workshop Engineer at x


Main responsibilities as a contractor at John Lewis Partnership:
- Diagnosing faults
- Repairing equipment
- Plumbing and draining repairs
- Tarmac repairs

Skills:
- Providing ideas and designs for ongoing projects
- Ability to manage, take decisions and work independently
- Relevant technical knowledge
- Good verbal, written, communications skills
- Effective problem solving

Main responsibilities as workshop engineer:
- Designing, build and installing (made to order) footbridges, bridle bridges,traffic bridges, fences, dipping platforms
- On-site welding (mild steel, aluminium and stainless steel)
- Monitoring stocks of materials, ordering missing ones
- Maintenance of workshop machinery including calibrating, adjusting and repairing
- PAT testing of all electrical equipment
- Managing stocks of supplies and equipment

Skills:
- Reading technical drawings
- Using electrotools ( lathe, milling machine, folding machine, guillotine)
- Using MIG, TIG, stick welders
- Ability to work at hights and confined spaces


January 2002 –March 2008 Upholsterer at x

Main responsibilities:
- Fit, install and secure material on workpiece using hand tools, glue and staples
- Adjust or replace webbing, padding and springs and secure them in place
- Examine upholstery to locate defects
- Repair furniture frames and refinish wood surfaces on furniture

Skills:
Attention to detail
Maths skills for taking measurements
Strong concentration skills
Patient, methodical and safety-conscious
Able to work without supervision


July 2000 – December 2002 Machine operator at PTS Ltd

- General labouring and manual work – moving product around the site
- Loading materials into machines
- Machine minding
- Stocking and packing finished products

Skills:
- a good understanding of production process, components and packages
- excellent soldering skills
- ability to multi task with changing priorities

Education and Qualifications

September 2016 – July 2017 LEVEL 3 DIPLOMA IN ELECTRICAL INSTALLATIONS
Peterborough Regional College ( Buildings and Structures)

September 2014 – June 2016 LEVEL 2 DIPLOMA IN ELECTRICAL INSTALLATIONS
Huntingdonshire Regional College ( Buildings and Structures )

September 1997 – June 2001 VOCATIONAL SECONDARY SCHOOL
( Car mechanic )

CERTIFICATES OF TRAINING:
CSCS Card
PAT testing at work
Counterbalance forklift truck
Working at height
Asbestos Awareness
Manual handling techniques
Telescopic materials handler
Abrasive wheels
Using of scafold towers
PAT testing at work
Emergency first aid at work

Driving license cat. A, B, B + E, C

przeczytalam tylko poczatek i dla mnie to troche wyglada jak z Polskiego na Angielski przez google przetlumaczone.

Staraj sie trzymac zdania w jednym romacie, nie powtarzac sie za duzo

zamiast about me - Ja bym dala - personal statement

Skills - dala bym, tylko raz i tam wymieniala wszystkie,

u mnie CV to mniej wiecej tak

dane
personal statement
education
qualification
skills
employment history
voluntary work
hobbies and interest

na koncu albo reference dane albo tylko dopisek " References on request"

Pamietaj ze zle CV na profecjonalne stanowisko bedzie raczej odrzucone nawet jesli ma sie dobre kwalifikacje

Pracowdawca po prostu uwaza ze skoro Twoje CV jest zle dop[racowane w pracy tez nie bedziesz uwazny

[ Ostatnio edytowany przez: littleflower 25-01-2018 16:37 ]

ja nie mam jakiegos mega doswiadczenia w pisaniu cv ale wydaje mi sie ze dobrze byloby je napisac pod konkretna prace a tutaj mam wrazenie ze ktos szuka pracy na menagera ale gdyby mial cos spawac lutowac lub toczyc tez nie pogardzi ewentualnie ukladac kartony na polce ale to przynajmniej za 7.50 : P

Dziekuje za odpowiedzi. Korzystalam glownie z przykladowych cv ale po angielsku.Podalam wszystkie stanowiska pracy od ukonczenia szkoly w Pl. Czyli mam wyrzucic te z Polski i zostawic jedynie pracodawce z UK? Maz pracuje od 10 lat w tej samej firmie

Doswiadcznie czy educacja z Polski sa wazne w CV

Ale CV tutaj pisze sie jak Chris zauwazyl pod prace,

Nie mozesz raczej wyslac tego samego CV na kazdy rodzaj stanowiska

jezeli masz zamiar wysylac te cv na zasadzie kopiuj wklej gdzie popadnie liczac ze moze znajdzie sie lepsza praca to jest ok jesli znajdziesz konkretna oferte a facet zna sie na tym co mialby robic a nie bedzie to ukladanie towaru to warto byloby cos nadsciemniac moze ; )

oczywiscie jak sciemniac to tylko "na terenie pl" chodzi o to ze jak sie nie czuje pewnie a przyzna ze jest tylko po kursie ewentualnie z malym doswiadczeniem to moze sie to odbic na stawce

Hej. Zgadzam sie z poprzednimi komentarzami. Moja rada to najpierw ustalic co chcecie napisac a dopiero pozniej- jak to napisac.
Z czesci o Twoim mezu dowiedzialam sie ze jest technically minded I ze poza tym niczym sie nie wyroznia. Za bardzo nie zachecilo mnie to do dalszej lektury.
Z kolei w czesci skills- umiejetnosci - czytamy odpowiednia wiedza techniczna, relevant technical knowledge, co jest pojeciem zbyt ogolnym I nic nie znaczy. Maz musialby zastapic to konkretami.
Po nazwie stanowiska powinny isc obowiazki w tej konkretnej pracy, responsibilities

Warto nad tym przysiasc, nie poddawac sie.
Pozdrawiam Ciebie oraz Littleflower i Crisa, dobry kaliber doradcow.
Acha sa bledy jezykowe- mozna by poprawic ale lepiej przerobic dokument.
Buzka

Z tego CV trudno wydobyc to co najwazniejsze czyli co wlasciwie umie. Napisanie "diagnosing fault" ?? W promie kosmicznym czy wozku dwukolowym ? To samo z repairing equipment ? Rakieta czy wozek? Raczej przykladowo "diagnosing and repairing electrical installation"

To moje stare stare CV - na nim dostalam sie do nawysze stanowisko w innej firme ( tez biurowe) Praca w biurze udowodnilam ze mam doswiadczenie w tym kierunku, praca w Macu pokazala ze nie tylko jestem ambitna ale mam doswiadczenie w kierownaiu ludzmi, praca w mamazyie pokazala ze mam pojecie na czym praca tam polega. Na moje CV dostalam sporo odpowiedzi - nawet teraz jeszcze po roku ludzie dzwonia z ofertami. Wlasnie widze ze edukacja(grades) tytaj wkleila mi sie zle - tzw w orginalnym CV wyglada duzo estetyczniej - tabela potem linie wymazane.


To jest tylko jako przykladowe CV, Wiem ze sa lepsze przyklady ale pisalam sama I bez pomocy.
Raczej w CV bym nie klamala za bardzo - na kilku interview bylam posadzona przed laptopem zeby udowodnic moja wiedze z PP czy Excelu , mialam takze typing test. Referencje byly tez sprawdzone. Moze dlatego ze na obecnym stanowisku operuje zamowiniami wartymi spore pieniadze.

Jedno co wiem bylo zle w moim CV to ze nie pokazalam czego do tej pory osiagnelam na angieslkim universytecie. POlskie studia nie wpisywalam jako ze wogolne nie mialy w tym zawodzie zadnego znaczenia ale wspomnialam o nich w cover letter


PERSONAL PROFILE

I am a professional, confident, credible and enthusiastic team player with a "can do" attitude. I am student, on my last year, of Open University where I am aiming for degree in Business Studies with Hons. Currently I am waiting for exam after which I have HND in Business Management. I was awarded “The Best Employee” numerous of times. I was a volunteer at the Paralympic Games in London 2012 where my work was noticed as outstanding and faultless. I received a number of Thank You letters and certificates eg from the Prime Minister - David Cameron. I have a valid First Aid at Work Certificate.

EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND

Apr 2014-present Open University, Milton Keynes - Business Studies and Law
Sep 2011-Jul 2012 Birmingham Metropolitan College, Sutton & M. Bolton Campuses
Nov 2010-Jul 2011 Cambridge University, McDonald’s, Burton-on-Trent
Sep 2007-Dec 2010 Burton College, Burton-on-Trent
Oct 2004-Jan 2006 Eunika High Secondary School, Lubin Poland

QUALIFICATIONS

Subject
Grade Subject Grade

L2 NVQ Business Admin Pass L1 BTEC Business Admin Pass
L2 Principles of Business & Admin Pass L2 NVQ Apprenticeship Hospitality Pass
L2 LMI Team Leader Certificate Pass L2 OCR English Skills for Life Pass
L2 EDI Certificate Pass L1 OCR Functional Skills in English Pass
L2 OCR Maths Skills for life Pass L2 NVQ Tourism Pass
L2 NVQ Stewarding and crowd dealing Pass
L2 NVQ Essential IT Skills
( Excel, PPoint, Data Base) Pass

Text Processing (Business Professional) Suite Level 1 Level 2

Text Processing Pass Pass
Word Processing Pass Pass
Business Presentation Pass Pass
Speed Keying Pass
Legal Text Pass

GSCE equivalent
Grade
GSCE equivalent
Grade

Polish/Russian/Geography (Level) A Sociology/Politics A
Chemistry/History, Biology A Maths/Physics/Business Skills A

WORK EXPERIENCE

Jun xxx – Mar 20x PDQ Distribution, Birmingham
Office Administrator
• Answering incoming calls in a professional manner.
• Effectively using company software systems eg (AS400) to book stock, transfer goods, producing manifests , realising and confirming orders and shipments, controlling the cycle of stocks
• Maintaining suitable and sufficient office stationary levels.
• Responsible for all company secretarial functions, duties and responsibilities.
• Entering data accurately onto computerised databases & Excel spreadsheets.
• Maintain logs of activities and completed work.
• Ensuring documents meet required quality standards.
• Dealing with inbounds and outbounds of stocks and distributed goods including making and taking booking with customers all over the words, dealing with received goods and booking transport for export
• Dealing with HR issues (checking Logs and payments, booking staff, leasing with recruitment agency when necessary)
• Compiling, coding, categorizing, calculating, tabulating and auditing data.
• Handling inbound telephone queries from colleagues / clients regarding data.
• Carrying out various administration tasks like, photocopying, filing.

May 2009– Jun 2014: McDonald's Birmingham, Burton-on-Trent

Shift Manager, Crew Trainer, Customer Care Assistant
• Effectively communicating, solving and referring any problem to Managers
• Operating till and cash handling
• Providing and developing training for new employees and other staff
• Build knowledge of key business matters in order to effectively identify and screen priorities
• Resolving customers’ complaints
• Organize and re-stock equipment needed for work
• Build good relationship with customers and team members
• Taking part in training courses to improve personal and working skills





 
SKILLS AND QUALITIES
Professional attitude to dealing with highly confidential and sensitive information
Excellent ambassador for company and its aims
Ability to adapt to a constantly changing and growing business environment
A strong orientation towards customer service, with knowledge and understanding of administrative services in support of client business goals
Self-motivated with ability to prioritise and execute tasks in a high pressure environment
Ability to work within a busy team environment and be calm under pressure
Proven ability to quickly pick up technology
Good attention to detail and reputation for perfection
Strong understanding of IT including MS Office, MS Windows and internet skills
Organised with good numeracy and literacy skills
Multilingual; able to speak English, Polish and Russian


VOLUNTARY EXPERIENCE

2012 London 2012, LOGOC Stratford Olympic Park - Basketball Stadium

I was a volunteer during the Paralympic Games in London 2012 as a steward. Responsibilities: security tasks, such as checking accreditations/tickets; helping spectators; giving information about facilities; safety and security rules; dealing with crowd exit or entry to the bowl; and entertaining spectators. I was also run “Back Of House” where I was responsible for ensure that all security procedures were followed by athletes, VIPs, broadcast, media and staff (technicians, medics, cleaners security), checking accreditations and communicated with others to ensure that all venues ran smoothly. My work there was acknowledged by several people (my Team Leader, the Manager of the Olympic Park and the Head Office of Scotland Yard) as outstanding.

2010-2011 Winshill Village Primary School Burton-on-Trent- teaching assistant

I was working there as a teaching assistant mainly with children of Reception Group and Year 2. My responsibilities were to support teachers with their daily tasks, support children's development through different activities, cleaning tasks and providing evidence of observation. Also I was helping teachers and pupils to translate from Polish -English when necessary.

1999-2004 Primary Integrated School Lubin - Poland

I was responsible for supporting teachers with meeting and organisation (teachers-pupils-parents-Head Office-Parent's Union at the school). I also maintained the accounts book, collected money, wrote receipts and supported teachers with organisation of school's events.


INTERESTS AND HOBBIES

My interests include: documentary and factual movies/books about nature, child development, sociology and world history especially ancient history and World War ll. In my spare time I love to travel and discover new places, especially historical places, doing charity work (RMHC - Raising money), dance lessons (Latin and classical) and reading/watching about current affairs/politics.

References are available on request

[ Ostatnio edytowany przez: littleflower 26-01-2018 07:59 ]

Dziekuje za sugestie. Postaram sie umiescic wiecej konkretow. Problem w tym, ze zakres jego obowiazkow jest bardzo szeroki od renowacji lazienek do naprawy zabezpieczen w sklepach Waitrose na terenie calej Anglii plus budowa kladek,mostow itd dla councila. Tzw.zlota raczka. Chce sie przekwalifikowac dlatego skonczyl kursy na elektryka. Tyle tylko, ze brak mu doswiadczenia w elektryce i tu sie zaczynaja schody.