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Hello, everyone, I'm Joey. I'm going to talk about the SWOT analysis for Etihad airways. Firstly, I shall say something about the strength of Etihad airways. Etihad Airways Company builds ideal partnership that can help them to increase revenue. The company build partnership with some famous airline companies such as NIKI,VIRGIN AUSTRALIAN and Middle east airlines. Secondly, Etihad airways provide personalized service to guest, including medical instruments, infant meal and religious meals. Thirdly, company promise ensured price on any third-party website for the same Etihad online booking. Good service made company gained some rewards, such as World's leading airline.

Let's move on the weakness of Etihad airways. When I analyses the weakness of this company, I found the airline route to China is limit, just three destinations, including Beijing, Shanghai and Chengdu. In the price aspect, compare with other airline companies provide price in same day. Etihad provides price is hardly to compete with other companies.

Now I'd like to turn to the opportunities of Etihad airways. The company provides customer’s loyalty programme is a good way to attract new customer and keep loyal customer.as Etihad company annual report shows that after provide loyalty program, guest increasing dramatically. Then ,building a good partnership also can bring benefits and opportunities to company, including earning and top business members. In addition, Etihad developing network management programs, not only expand new routes, but also save cost. Network management can increase income to company.

Turning next to the threats of Etihad airways. The company face threat from outside competition environment.  The company not only competes with other airline companies, but also faces challenge from other transportation companies. Secondly, the threat of external weather is existed. The annual report shows that external weather effect the airline's performance. Thirdly, Etihad meets the threat from terrorist. In BBC news illustrates that Etihad jet landing at Pakistani airport due to find a bomb on the toilet.

The next aspect, I'd like to talk about some recommendation .In my opinion, Etihad can increase security inspection to avoid terrorist problem. Then, China exist lots of potential profit, Etihad can develop new routes in China. In the price aspect, provide special offer is good way to compete with other airline companies.

Kurczę, trochę długie

No ale tak co mi się rzuciło w oczy to bym zamienił:

I found the airline route to China is limit -- > I found that the number of routes to China is limited.

Etihad provides price is hardly to compete with other companies. --> Etihad Airways fares are very competitive.

Now I'd like to turn to the opportunities of Etihad airways --> Now I'd like to analyse good points of Etihad Airways

...ale to nie wszystko.

wsumie do jutra mam czas wiec jak mozesz jeszcze cos znalesc to byl bym bardzo wdzieczy i juz dziekuje

czasownik w trzeciej osobie, gubisz czesto "s"

dziekuje

Kilka dodatkowych uwag:

Let's move on the weakness of Etihad airways. => Let's move on the weaknesses of Etihad airways.

When I analyses the weakness => When I analysed the weaknesses

The company provides customer’s loyalty programme which is is a good way to attract new customer and keep loyal customer.

As Etihad company annual report shows that after provide loyalty program, guest increasing dramatically. => As Etihad company annual report shows after providing loyalty program, the number of guests (?custommers?) increased dramatically.


In addition, Etihad is developing network management programs, not only to expand to new routes, but also to save cost.

Network management can increase income of the company.

[ Ostatnio edytowany przez: AndrzejW 04-12-2012 10:16 ]

dziekuje bardzo wszystkie uwagi sa cenne

The company build partnership, tutaj s nie jest potrzebne gdyz bierze sie pod uwage grupe ludzi jako firme. Wiec build tak jak jest w tekscie, a nie builds.

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